It was a Sunday morning. It was a really cold day I had to wake up so early to help Mary to do the honey. Mary and I we were at the Kitchen, Rosaleen and June were coming to the kitchen too. After a while August was going to do the dinner for everyone. August was the first one to be awake. After a minute I was thinking that what if T-Ray wanted it to take Mary and me away from Rosaleen, August and June. I didn't know what to do if I should have told Rosaleen about what I was thinking.
We were at the house the whole day because it was to cold to go out. Been with them it made me happy. Even though I was thinking about the problem that I had. I was really scare that T-Ray was going to come over for Mary and me. I was thinking about it all day I couldn't stop thinking about it. I couldn't even eat because I had T-Ray on my mind. After this I had a dream about my mom I was crying because she was dead Rosaleen sow me cry she was talking to me she said, what's wrong I was like I'm crying because mom is not with me anymore Rosaleen told me don't cry anymore your mom always going to be with me anywhere I go. I couldn't stop crying it hurt me so bad that she wasn't with me anymore by my side.
After dinner, June told me why was my eyes red, and I told her what I had told Rosaleen. June had told me the same thing that Rosaleen said to me. I thank Rosaleen, June, Mary, and August to be there for me when I need them. The sun was going down and I was really tired of helping Mary do the honey. Before I went to bed, I told Rosaleen and June thanks for helping me. When I got to bed I fall asleep right away. I was ready for the next day to make some more honey.
We were at the house the whole day because it was to cold to go out. Been with them it made me happy. Even though I was thinking about the problem that I had. I was really scare that T-Ray was going to come over for Mary and me. I was thinking about it all day I couldn't stop thinking about it. I couldn't even eat because I had T-Ray on my mind. After this I had a dream about my mom I was crying because she was dead Rosaleen sow me cry she was talking to me she said, what's wrong I was like I'm crying because mom is not with me anymore Rosaleen told me don't cry anymore your mom always going to be with me anywhere I go. I couldn't stop crying it hurt me so bad that she wasn't with me anymore by my side.
After dinner, June told me why was my eyes red, and I told her what I had told Rosaleen. June had told me the same thing that Rosaleen said to me. I thank Rosaleen, June, Mary, and August to be there for me when I need them. The sun was going down and I was really tired of helping Mary do the honey. Before I went to bed, I told Rosaleen and June thanks for helping me. When I got to bed I fall asleep right away. I was ready for the next day to make some more honey.
I liked the way you described how you were feeling and how you said you couldnt eat because of t-ray
ReplyDeleteI like the way you expressed yourself through the writing.And the strong emotions.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said that the day was cold instead of just saying it was another day. I liked how you said Lily's feelings and thoughts.
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